Stepmother's Punishment: The Semen Extractor Kindle Edition

Did a fine job of getting right to the meat (pun intended) of the story. Left me wanting more of the story. Found myself a bit thirsty for some. Bring us some more good stuff. When you were writing did you think of the step mom taking a sample of the product the treatment provided? Good work.

The premise for the story starts out well, but quickly spirals into wet BS.Firstly, the prolific misspellings distract from the storyline. E.G.: it's "manner", not "Manor", and it's "cum", not "come" to describe seminal fluid.Secondly, the author seems to know little about male sexual behavior. No man can be forced to ejaculate 16 times in what, an hour long psychologist session? It takes a long time to produce a second load, let alone 16. A vacuum erection device can help induce another erection, but that doesn't induce the prostate to make more cum.Maybe if the author said that the torturous session took over a week, but the poor guy never had any food or water or a potty break the whole time.The author should have considered a twisted ending: after he recovered from the "treatment," the stepmother peers into his bedroom and finds him on his knees licking his own cum off his hands between giving successive BJs to three homeless men. The stepmother then realizes that the "treatment" only caused the kid to become hopelessly addicted to eating cum from anywhere he could get it.Gee, I had more credible sexual fantasies when I was in middle school.